MPAA
Rationale
I
start the essay off by delivering a snappy hook, a head twisting
fact, and then the thesis itself. The snappy hook is there to serve
its self-titled purpose, using popular movies to connect with
readers. The head-twisting fact will set the mood for the rest of the
paper and make the thesis seemed less harsh than if it came without
the strong fact. At last, the thesis states how the paper will
continue for the following nine pages and serve as a guide for what
readers should expect to be proven and what will follow.
The
first couple sentences serves the same purpose as the hook in the
first paragraph, but also sets the MPAA on the cutting board for the
following facts. Using Ableman and Gubbins’ study, I’ll show that
parents may not follow the MPAA’s ratings in the first place,
therefore placing it at a low state of importance to its targeted
demographic. The quote really serves this purpose well, making it
seem less “how I was raised” and more “how the average child is
raised.” To avoid making movies the winning adversary in the MPAA
paper I’m setting up, I used Herbert and Hammond’s guide to set
movies in the right light for readers. Their quote shows just how
much good a movie can serve besides entertainment. The following
source returns to the first, describing how kids themselves aren’t
deterred to watching ‘unsuited’ movies for their age. After
describing the study procedures, the quote that I use shows how
children don’t mind the ratings—to the point of either infliction
or rebellion. Wilson’s article describes how violence is tricky to
pin down in ratings, since violence could be whimsical or gritty and
be rated based on surface value. The next article acts as both the
final point for the MPAA’s service to parents and the introduction
to “ratings creep.” By describing the lack of restriction on
PG-13 movies, we start to see less strain placed onto children about
smoking and a good Segway for the next topic.
The
topic of “ratings creep” comes up as another hook, but jumps
right into the thesis’s statement to map out where the reader is at
in the paper.
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