Thursday, February 26, 2015

Literature Review

Christopher Bryan
02/05/2015
English Composition 2
Literature Review

A movie where children and teenagers are forced to brawl to the death for entertainment, in a fantasy world (Hunger Games), is rated PG-13; whereas a movie where children are bullied by other children, in the world we live in, is rated R (Bully). If you’re frowning at the idea or shrugging it off, you’re already taking a side on the debate of how the MPAA regulates a movie’s content—possibly how it’s morphed the industry of Hollywood to a PG-13 frenzy of torture, genocide, drugs, mild language and decency in clothing. A few movies such as Bully and The Kings Speech were given the R treatment not because of an over-saturation or glorifying of these features, but because of foul language. In past cases of R ratings appealing to PG-13, such as Gunner Palace, “fuck” was permitted 47 times. In the sense of violence, the highest ranking on-screen body count in cinema history just so happens to be a PG-13 movie (Lord of the Rings: Return of the King), at 836. Can the public, and the MPAA itself, say that it’s serving its purpose—to stand in place for parents when judging the content of movies? To abstain from speaking for the public, three subject areas will be investigated and sources presented for judgment: The Success Report of the MPAA, Content Awareness: Violence and Language, and Controversy and Criticism.
To talk about how well the MPAA serves the public, more or less the parents, a number of sources will be used to investigate this topic. From Robert Abelman and Jean E. Gubbins article, “Preaching to the Choir: TV Advisory Usage among Parents of Gifted Children,” they provide a  lengthy study on the parental act of guarding children from more mature rated television and film, dependent on whether the child was “gifted” or not. This can present a bias in what kind of parent, a necessary trait to be a judge for the MPAA, will have on their value of not only what a child should see, but how much value there is in what their child sees. This can be applied to talking about the parents, the reviewers of MPAA ratings, and how their judging can be biased according to their children and what they’d normally let them watch. I will also use it to show how the ratings provided to parents influence their decision to allow children to watch the content. From talking about the effect of media to the use of it, Thomas P. Hebert and Daniel R. Hammond’s “Guided Viewing of Film with Gifted Students: Resources for Educators and Counselors”, is an article that discusses the uses of movies on educating gifted children, based on discussion and context. This isn't too applicable to my topic, but a few statements on the MPAA and how movies reflect to the rating can be quoted. This should be used when discussing the effects of movie ratings, how children see similar rated movies at different levels of maturity, and whenever discussing the brief versus real content inside a movie. Another well-minded study, “The Role of Television Advisories and Ratings in Parent-Child Discussion of Television Viewing Choices,” from Marina Krcmar and Joanne Cantor, talks about the audience, adults to younger children, determining whether they had noticed what the ratings to the movie they saw was, if it deterred them or enticed them to watch it, and hypothesis about what this could mean for the ratings system. This is a very good article for discussing the non-commercial side of the ratings system, rather how people watch movies based on rating or if it matters at all. This study can be used when discussing the effectiveness of ratings. Descending from statistics to heart, Barbara Wilson’s "What's Wrong with the Ratings?" discusses the repercussions of children at different ages experiencing violence in media, from a professional's point of view. This article doesn't focus on studies or surveys, but comes from well-advised word-of-mouth about the topics that need to be thought of when violent acts occur on screen. This article can be used near the beginning to establish how violent acts aren't as simple as gore, and near the end when advice can be given on how to resolve this dilemma. The last source, a survey from Worth Keilah, Sonya Cin, and James Sargent, "Prevalence of Smoking among Major Movie Characters: 1996-2004,” is A study published in Tobacco Control about the amount of movie characters in the top 100 box office, for the years 1996 to 2004, that smoked and how it reflects to the MPAA rating and the public's smoking status at the time. It shows how smoking has become a bigger part of PG-13 movies, making it more accessible to children. In the same study, it shows that smoking is on the decline and may not be applicable to fighting against the MPAA's rating. The study will be used to face MPAA supporters and then criticize their judgment with the same source.
Is there a risk? That depends on the sounds and sights in cinemas, and what the MPAA has to say about it. Just how much violence and language can movies get away—or not get away with? The best way to introduce this topic is to showcase how far people will go to censor movies against their taste; specifically James C. Schmidt’s "Sex-and-Violence Ratings: What's in Them for Libraries?" This article discusses a few court cases concerning cities and government attempting to apply consequences to higher rated MPAA movies and defines ratings of all media. The article is focused on permitting content in public libraries, but it also shows the lengths people will go to express their distaste towards movies, if given the chance. This can be used when describing how the MPAA sets up a target for people to hate and discriminate against, filing mature rated films with things that should be shunned. The article can also be used in elaborating on previous struggles for independent, low budget film makers to release their uncensored version of their movie. Continuing with a late-topical-hot-spot in recent years, Bully, a documentary by Lee Hirsch in 2011, is a film about bullying in the US, interviewing and covering several students in different schooling levels. Not only a good topic on its own, but also had to censor itself in order to be seen by the audience affected. This is attached to multiple articles on MPAA censorship and views on film. It’s worth talking about what this film represents and the message it delivers. In a major head-twister, the documentary Gunner Palace from Michael Tucker in 2004 had received a very different outcome. Covering U.S. soldiers in Iraq, the film was released in limited theaters in 2005 as PG-13 on appeal of 42 uses of "fuck", more than any PG-13 movie ever. A great debatable point on the ethics and standpoint of the MPAA, regarding what they rate and the content of why it's rated such. Will be used in the right point of the argument, since using it too soon can use up a great arguing point and too late will make it a last ditch effort. Then, five years in the same theaters, The King’s Speech from Tom Hooper, was another film rated R for its strong language, which was cut down to meet PG-13 standards. This is becoming a trend, but it will apply to how the MPAA sees language as a more damning factor than violence. This will be used in conjunction to the articles that talk about it or when discussing movies struck with similar issues. To address the violence of cinema in recent years, Peter Jackson’s Lord of the Rings: Return of the King is a movie worth discussing due to not only it's excessive violence and maturity, but having the highest on-screen body count of any movie ever, G through NC-17. It's worth discussing, because a lot of articles don't bring up its violent nature, and it can balance the heavy language-argument that most news pieces / opinions discuss. Will be used after discussing the multitude of language-related movies, probably siding next to Saw 3D for its violent nature as well. To connect all four films in academic taste, an article by Priya Nalkur, Patrick Jamieson, and Daniel Romer—titled “Movies From 1950 to 2006”, is a study published in Journal of Adolescent Health concerning the screening process of violent and sexual content, based upon judgment from the MPAA. The study concludes that although sexual content is segregated from R and PG-13 movies, violence that would have been rated R has "creeped" into PG-13. Another article, a study from Medscape, comes from Kimberly Thompson and Fumie Yokota. "Violence, Sex, and Profanity in Films: Correlation of Movie Ratings With Content”, a well-studied paper on the connection of violence and ratings to content, and the "ratings creep" that has moved controversial content downwards. This article can be utilized in giving a professional statement about the various ways the MPAA is letting detrimental behavior leak into younger ratings and how the purpose of the acts are not taken into consideration. This can be used when discussing "ratings creep", profitability, and ignoring the purpose of violence-- in the research paper. To explain a theory on why I believe, and why many critics of the MPAA believe this “creep” is occurring, comes from an article by Abraham S. Ravid, titled "Managerial Objectives, the R-Rating Puzzle, and the Production of Violent Films”, which discusses the revenue of violent films, not PG-13, but still in relation to the topic at hand. It reveals that movies with higher violence and sexual content have better predictability at the box office, regardless of reviews. This can be used when discussing the ways we watch films based on their rating instead of their value. To prove this article with recent evidence, Saw 3D from Kevin Greutert, a high grossing success, is a movie referenced in a few articles on how movies compare to other movies in MPAA ratings. Horrifically graphic and deprived of unique or noteworthy plot (If you dare contest me and a hundred top critics on Rotten Tomatoes), it shows how we rate violence to language in the same area. This will be discussed in conjunction to the articles that bring it up. Then to wrap it up, a few quotes from Richard Nowell’s ""The Ambitions of Most Independent Filmmakers": Indie Production, the Majors, and Friday the 13th (1980)”, should help transition the subject. A revealing research paper about someone who'd talked to various artists in Hollywood, the indie scene, and how both parties are treated when it comes to revenue and MPAA. It's a good ending piece, but since it's subjects are dated and not too related to PG-13 ratings, it stands for a few quotes in the overall paper I'm writing.

Throughout the years, the public has not been silent on the actions of the MPAA and the ways movies have changed to adapt. An old article, dating back to the 1970’s, from Roy E. Bates’ "Private Censorship of Movies." This article gives a well stated history and position at its time on the demand for higher regulation on movies and those who stand against it. It will not only help the topic feel greater than it’s been portrayed recently, but can also give insight on more controversial court cases and their rulings / reasoning. It will help set the backdrop for how long films have been contested against for their freedom and where the MPAA started. I will use it for quoting the cases of yesterday and today, then present a pre-existing problem that has yet to be solved. To follow up with this issue is a more recent, less academic article from Tierney Sneed’s "Don’t Expect Any Major Changes to the MPAA Ratings System in 2014." A news article that not only states the semi-current status of the MPAA's stance on its criticism, but also gives a brief look over and understanding of the MPAA and how it affects movies. It'll be a good introductory source, plentiful on everything my research paper’s about and lots of ways to launch off into several planned topics. To follow up past articles showcasing “ratings creep,” Jake Coyle’s "MPAA Defends Ratings System: Parents Are Happy,” is an online news article taking a fierce stance against the recent ruling of R-rated films whereas PG-13 films have become far more explicit. It works into my research paper by providing emotion and reaction to events which if I stated myself would look biased. It basically represents the protesters for the MPAA, and their reasoning for it. Quotable, but not a major development on its own. When applied to certain highlights of the research paper, it can swat rebuttals or parade criticism. It will be used in conjunction with the opening paragraphs and wherever applicable for rebuttal. To add spice to the prior article, Miriam Krule’s "A.O. Scott’s Explanations of MPAA Ratings Are Even Better Than His Movie Reviews,” has a lot of good statements to quote from. This is a brief article about a movie reviewer who bashes the MPAA for its ratings on movies of genocide to language. Good for a quote or two, just to sound snappy without being outright so. Will probably be used after a rebuttal on the MPAA's side about its ratings, but with good taste. This will lead back to Bully, a previously discussed film, with Amanda Kehrberg’s "Bully Ratings Controversy Sparks Criticism of MPAA System."  Kehrberg wrote an opinion piece about how Bully was rated, due to its language, and how it reflects to what happens in real life to what we see through a camera. This piece is very quotable, and can be connected to other articles and debated with other movies such as Gunner Palace. This will be used later on in the research paper, after the statements from surveys have been used, because it has a lot of points and statements that can stick to readers for the rest of the paper. In a last ditch effort to give the MPAA credit for the movies they’re shaping today, I’ve found an interesting article from David Franklin, called "The Professor As Censor: Creative Limitation and Film Production Pedagogy." It’s an article about a film professor that censors his students for a year, then relates it to others who have censored their students and achieved interesting results due to it being a challenge. This can be used when talking about how censorship / the MPAA could be channeling the best content out of how films restrict themselves. Used in the middle, after statements discrediting the MPAA's efforts are made. To refute his ideas about limitation, specifically for the MPAA, Roger Ebert wrote a great piece in 2010, called "Getting Real About Movie Ratings." It’s an article that comes from a highly regarded movie critic, criticizing the MPAA for its ratings and reviewing the taste of cinema in his past 40 years of work. It doesn't have much factual statements, and his rating system is below serious, but he’s legendary to movie critics anywhere. It will probably be another article to emotionally support the surveys and scientific conduction. Since the name is synonymous for film, it’ll be a good source to end the research paper with when stating the current affair with the MPAA. To wrap up the subject, I’m using Phillips, Michael Phillips, "There's a Word for the MPAA...." An article about a writer whose recent outrage of The King's Speech and Saw 3D being both rated R, and how other countries have rated it. He quotes others and riffs on the PG-13 movies with more mature content, and it makes for a very quotable article.

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Chapter 13 Review

   Chapter 13 of the Bedford Researcher brings up, a bit late in my opinion, Organizing and all methods and tips to it. As usual, several questions are asked in this chapter, and they're answered in their own way. The first question, "What organizing pattern should I choose?" runs through eleven choices: Chronology, the sequence of time, Description, the features, Definition, the explanation, Cause/Effect, set-ups and consequences, Process Explanation, step-by-step walkthroughs, Pro/Con, the good and bad, Multiple Perspectives, the various sources where information comes from, Comparison/Contrast, synthesize and classifying, and then three similar phrases to Pro/Con. Each of these methods apply to specific arguments, so there isn't a casual choice here. The second question, "How can I arrange my argument?" has four brief answers. "Label Evidence", segregating sources to parts of your paper, "Group Evidence", simply placing it all in one accessible area, "Use Clustering", a webbing-map of ideas to your thesis, and "Use Mapping", a timeline-like structure for your sources. The third question, "How can I create an outline?" Throws the answer up to you and your needs. Both informal and formal will serve you, as shown in the example, but it depends on what is asked of you.
   I can use the information from Chapter 13 when I work on my course project in Archaeology, which is another research paper I have to complete by the end of this quarter.

Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Annotated Bibliography

Christopher Bryan
02/05/2015
English Composition 2
Annotated Bibliography

Abelman, Robert, and E. Jean Gubbins. "Preaching to the Choir: TV Advisory Usage among Parents of Gifted Children." Roeper Review 22.1 (1999): 56-64. Web. 27 Jan. 2015.
This article from 1999 is a  lengthy study on the parental act of guarding children from more mature rated television and film, dependent on whether the child was “gifted” or not. This can present a bias in what kind of parent, a necessary trait to be a judge for the MPAA, will have on their value of not only what a child should see, but how much value there is in what their child sees. This can be applied to talking about the parents, the reviewers of MPAA ratings, and how their judging can be biased according to their children and what they’d normally let them watch. I will also use it to show how the ratings provided to parents influence their decision to allow children to watch the content.

Bates, Roy E. "Private Censorship of Movies." Stanford Law Review. Stanford Law Review, (Feb. 1970) Web. 29 Jan. 2015.
This is a dated article that gives a well stated history and position at its time on the demand for higher regulation on movies and those who stand against it. It will not only help the topic feel greater than it’s been portrayed recently, but can also give insight on more controversial court cases and their rulings / reasoning. It will help set the backdrop for how long films have been contested against for their freedom and where the MPAA started. I will use it for quoting the cases of yesterday and today, then present a pre-existing problem that has yet to be solved.

Bully. Dir. Lee Hirsch. The Weinstein Company. 2011. Film.
This film is a documentary about the bullying in the US, interviewing and covering several students in different schooling levels. Not only a good topic on its own, but also had to censor itself in order to be seen by the audience affected. This is attached to multiple articles on MPAA censorship and views on film. It’s worth talking about what this film represents and the message it brings in comparison to how the MPAA would block it from children in exception to other examples.

Coyle, Jake. "MPAA Defends Ratings System: Parents Are Happy." The Huffington Post. 13 (Nov. 2013) Web. 21 Jan. 2015. < http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/11/13/mpaa-ratings-system_n_4269665.html>.
This is an online news article taking a fierce stance against the recent ruling of R-rated films whereas PG-13 films have become far more explicit. It works into my research paper by providing emotion and reaction to events which if I stated myself would look biased. It basically represents the protesters for the MPAA, and their reasoning for it. Quotable, but not a major development on its own. When applied to certain highlights of the research paper, it can swat rebuttals or parade criticism. It will be used in conjunction with the opening paragraphs and wherever applicable for rebuttal.

Ebert, Roger. "Getting Real About Movie Ratings." WSJ. (11 Dec. 2010) Web. 28 Jan. 2015.< http://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424052748703766704576009343432436296>.
An article that comes from a highly regarded movie critic, criticizing the MPAA for its ratings and reviewing the taste of cinema in his past 40 years of work. It doesn't have much factual statements, and his rating system is below serious, but he’s legendary to movie critics anywhere. It will probably be another article to emotionally support the surveys and scientific conduction. Since the name is synonymous for film, it’ll be a good source to end the research paper with when stating the current affair with the MPAA.

Nalkur, Priya, Patrick Jamieson, and Daniel Romer. “Movies From 1950 to 2006." ScienceDirect. Elsevier, (1 Nov. 2010) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1054139X10000790>.
A study published in Journal of Adolescent Health concerning the screening process of violent and sexual content, based upon judgment from the MPAA. The study concludes that although sexual content is segregated from R and PG-13 movies, violence that would have been rated R has "creeped" into PG-13.

Franklin, David. "The Professor As Censor: Creative Limitation and Film Production Pedagogy." Journal of Film and Video. Journal of Film and Video, 53.1: 25-39. (Spring 2001) Web. 29 Jan. 2015. 
An article about a film professor that censors his students for a year, then relates it to others who have censored their students and achieved interesting results due to it being a challenge. This can be used when talking about how censorship / the MPAA could be channeling the best content out of how films restrict themselves. Used in the middle, after statements discrediting the MPAA's efforts are made.

Gunner Palace. Dir. Michael Tucker. Palm Pictures. 2004. Film.
A war documentary about U.S. soldiers in Iraq, released in 2005 as PG-13 on appeal of 42 uses of "fuck", more than any PG-13 movie ever. A great debatable point on the ethics and standpoint of the MPAA, regarding what they rate and the content of why it's rated such. Will be used in the right point of the argument, since using it too soon can use up a great arguing point and too late will make it a last ditch effort.

Hebert, Thomas P., and Daniel R. Hammond. "Guided Viewing of Film with Gifted Students: Resources for Educators and Counselors." Gifted Child Today 29.3 (2006): 14-27. Web. 27 Jan. 2015.
An article that discusses the uses of movies on educating gifted children, based on discussion and context. This isn't too applicable to my topic, but a few statements on the MPAA and how movies reflect to the rating can be quoted. This should be used when discussing the effects of movie ratings, how children see similar rated movies at different levels of maturity, and whenever discussing the brief versus real content inside a movie.

Kehrberg, Amanda. "Bully Ratings Controversy Sparks Criticism of MPAA System." NewTimes Phoenix. (5 Apr. 2012) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://blogs.phoenixnewtimes.com/jackalope/2012/04/bully_phoenix_film_festival_ra.php>.
An opinion piece about how Bully was rated, due to its language, and how it reflects to what happens in real life to what we see through a camera. This piece is very quotable, and can be connected to other articles and debated with other movies such as Gunner Palace. This will be used later on in the research paper, after the statements from surveys have been used, because it has a lot of points and statements that can stick to readers for the rest of the paper.

The Kings Speech. Dir. Tom Hooper. Perf. Colin Firth, Geoffrey Rush, and Helena Bonham Carter. The Weinstein Company. 2010. Film.
Another film rated R for its strong language, which was cut down to meet PG-13 standards. This is becoming a trend, but it will apply to how the MPAA sees language as a more damning factor than violence. This will be used in conjunction to the articles that talk about it or when discussing movies struck with similar issues.

Krcmar, Marina, and Joanne Cantor. "The Role of Television Advisories and Ratings in Parent-Child Discussion of Television Viewing Choices." Journal of Broadcasting and Electronic Media 41.3 (1997): 393-411. Web. 27 Jan. 2015.
A study placed on adults to younger children, determining whether they had noticed what the ratings to the movie they saw was, if it deterred them or enticed them to watch it, and hypothesis about what this could mean for the ratings system. This is a very good article for discussing the non-commercial side of the ratings system, rather how people watch movies based on rating or if it matters at all. This study can be used when discussing the effectiveness of ratings.

Krule, Miriam. "A.O. Scott’s Explanations of MPAA Ratings Are Even Better Than His Movie Reviews."Browbeat. (28 Mar. 2014) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.slate.com/blogs/browbeat/2014/03/28/new_york_times_mpaa_rating_explanations_how_a_o_scott_turns_pg_13s_into.html>.
A brief article about a movie reviewer who bashes the MPAA for its ratings on movies of genocide to language. Good for a quote or two, just to sound snappy without being outright so. Will probably be used after a rebuttal on the MPAA's side about its ratings, but with good taste.

The Lord of the Rings: Return of the King. Dir. Peter Jackson. Perf. Elijah Wood, Ian McKellen, and Viggo Mortensen. New Line Cinema. 2003. Film
A movie worth discussing due to not only it's excessive violence and maturity, but having the highest on-screen body count of any movie ever, G through NC-17. It's worth discussing, because a lot of articles don't bring up its violent nature, and it can balance the heavy language-argument that most news pieces / opinions discuss. Will be used after discussing the multitude of language-related movies, probably siding next to Saw 3D for its violent nature as well.

Nowell, Richard. ""The Ambitions of Most Independent Filmmakers": Indie Production, the Majors, and Friday the 13th (1980)." Journal of Film and Video. University of Illinois Press, 63.2 (Summer. 2011) Web. 29 Jan. 2015.
Article from an Online Database or Subscription Service - A revealing research paper about someone who'd talked to various artists in Hollywood, the indie scene, and how both parties are treated when it comes to revenue and MPAA. It's a good beginning piece, but since it's subjects are dated and not too related to PG-13 ratings, it stands for a few quotes in the overall paper I'm writing.

Phillips, Michael. "There's a Word for the MPAA...." Chicago Tribune. Tribune Publishing, (4 Nov. 2010) Web. 15 Jan. 2015.< http://articles.chicagotribune.com/2010-11-04/entertainment/chi-talking-pictures-1105_1_joan-graves-r-rating-mpaas>.
An article about a writer whose recent outrage of The King's Speech and Saw 3D being both rated R, and how other countries have rated it. He quotes others and riffs on the PG-13 movies with more mature content, and it makes for a very quotable article. It will be used in the beginning, possibly the first paragraph, when igniting the topic of the research paper.

Ravid, Abraham Ravid S. "Managerial Objectives, the R-Rating Puzzle, and the Production of Violent Films." The Journal of Buisness. The University of Chicago Press, n.d. Web. 29 Jan.
An article that discusses the revenue of violent films, not PG-13, but still in relation to the topic at hand. It reveals that movies with higher violence and sexual content have better predictability at the box office, regardless of reviews. This can be used when discussing the ways we watch films based on their rating instead of their value.

Saw 3D. Dir. Kevin Greutert. Perf. Tobin Bell, Costas Mandylor, and Betsy Russell. Lionsgate. 2010.
A movie referenced in a few articles on how movies compare to other movies in MPAA ratings. Horrifically graphic and deprived of unique or noteworthy plot (If you dare contest me and a hundred top critics on Rotten Tomatoes), it shows how we rate violence to language in the same area. This will be discussed in conjunction to the articles that bring it up.

Schmidt, C. James. "Sex-and-Violence Ratings: What's in Them for Libraries?" American Libraries. American Library Association, 31.4 (Apr. 2000): 44-46. Web. 20 Jan. 2015.< http://www.jstor.org/stable/25637581>.
This article discusses a few court cases concerning cities and government attempting to apply consequences to higher rated MPAA movies and defines ratings of all media. The article is focused on permitting content in public libraries, but it also shows the lengths people will go to express their distaste towards movies, if given the chance. This can be used when describing how the MPAA sets up a target for people to hate and discriminate against, filing mature rated films with things that should be shunned. The article can also be used in elaborating on previous struggles for independent, low budget film makers to release their uncensored version of their movie.

Sneed, Tierney. "Don’t Expect Any Major Changes to the MPAA Ratings System in 2014." US News. U.S.News & World Report, (7 Jan. 2014) Web. 15 Jan. 2015.< http://www.usnews.com/news/articles/2014/01/07/dont-expect-a-new-movie-ratings-system-in-2014>.
A news article that not only states the semi-current status of the MPAA's stance on its criticism, but also gives a brief look over and understanding of the MPAA and how it affects movies. It'll be a good introductory source, plentiful on everything my research paper’s about and lots of ways to launch off into several planned topics.

Thompson, Kimberly, and Fumie Yokota. "Violence, Sex, and Profanity in Films: Correlation of Movie Ratings With Content." Medscape. Medscape, 6.3 (3 June 2004) Web. 15 Jan. 2015.< http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/480900>.
A well-studied paper on the connection of violence and ratings to content, and the "ratings creep" that has moved controversial content downwards. This article can be utilized in giving a professional statement about the various ways the MPAA is letting detrimental behavior leak into younger ratings and how the purpose of the acts are not taken into consideration. This can be used when discussing "ratings creep", profitability, and ignoring the purpose of violence-- in the research paper.

Wilson, Barbara. "What's Wrong with the Ratings?" Center for Media Literacy. Web. 28 Jan. 2015.< http://www.medialit.org/reading-room/whats-wrong-ratings>.
An article that discusses the repercussions of children at different ages experiencing violence in media, from a professional's point of view. This article doesn't focus on studies or surveys, but comes from well-advised word-of-mouth about the topics that need to be thought of when violent acts occur on screen. This article can be used near the beginning to establish how violent acts aren't as simple as gore, and near the end when advice can be given on how to resolve this dilemma.

Worth Keilah, Sonya Cin, and James Sargent. "Prevalence of Smoking among Major Movie Characters: 1996-2004." Tobacco Control. 15.6 (Dec. 2006): 442-446. Web. 20 Jan. 2015.< http://www.jstor.org/stable/20748060>.
A study published in Tobacco Control about the amount of movie characters in the top 100 box office, for the years 1996 to 2004, that smoked and how it reflects to the MPAA rating and the public's smoking status at the time. It shows how smoking has become a bigger part of PG-13 movies, making it more accessible to children. In the same study, it shows that smoking is on the decline and may not be applicable to fighting against the MPAA's rating. The study will be used to face MPAA supporters and then criticize their judgment with the same source.

Chapter 19 Review

   Chapter 19 of the Bedford Researcher discusses the ways of mastering different formats of presentation in, "Designing Document and Presentations." Although English Composition 102 is only focusing on academic essays, it will probably be safe to cover all six forms of presentation. The six topics discuss the different forms of academic essays, multimodal essays, articles, Web sites, oral presentation, and multimedia presentation designs. All forms are concerned with both considering the purpose and the reader's expectations about design, but each document / presentation has different needs to meet to execute successfully. While most can be compared with pre-existing examples, topics such as oral presentation may be harder to base your presentation from, since it's a combination of grounded and live presentation. Other topics, like multimodal essays, require the presenter to narrow down their document type more, since there's a great amount of options for that format.
   Although there's only one topic out of this chapter that I can be concerned about at the time being, the other five topics may be utilized in the future and are important to remember. At some point in the future, it might be requested of me to submit a PowerPoint format of essay, when depicting or dissecting films or other forms of art.

Chapter 18 Review

   Chapter 18 of the Bedford Researcher covers "Understanding Design Principles", a topic more suited to aesthetics than formality. In this chapter, two questions are answered with text and examples. The first question, "How can I design effectively?" Is elaborated in four categories. The first, "Understanding Design Principles", is broken into "Balance... Emphasis... Placement... Repetition... [and] Consistency." The second, "Design for a Purpose", is broken into "Setting a Tone... Helping Readers Understand a Point... Convincing Readers to Accept a Point... [and] Clarifying Complex Concepts." The third, "Design for Your Readers", is broken into "Help Readers Understand the Organization of a Document... Help Readers Locate Information and Ideas... [and] Help Readers Recognize the function of Parts of a Document." The last point is to "Design to Address Genre Conventions." The second question, "What design elements can I use?" Is answered in four brief paragraphs: "Use Fonts, Line Spacing, and Alignment... Use Page Layout Elements... Use Color, Shading, Borders, and Rules... [and] Use Illustrations."
   I can use the information from Chapter 18 by incorporating it into my formatting and style of my research paper. When fully utilizing the concepts and ideas from the text, my research paper has the potential to stand out for it's organization before being noticed by it's content.

Thursday, February 12, 2015

Chapter 12 Review

Chapter 12 of the Bedford Researcher, another brief chapter for today, continues the conclusion from the prior chapter and discusses "Developing Your Argument". The first question, "How can I support my thesis statement?" is answered in three steps. Step one, "choose reasons", which sounds easy enough, but can vary on the audience, medium, and topic you're on. Step two, "select evidence to support your reasons", also sounds obvious, but once again depends upon what kind of paper you're creating, be it audible, text, or in motion. Step three, "decide how to appeal to your readers", has various end goals to choose from: such as authority, emotion, principles / values / beliefs, character, and logic. The second question, "How can I assess the integrity of my argument?" Isn't answered in steps, but a set of guidelines to check on before proceeding. You should be checking "for fallacies based on distraction", like "a red herring" "ad hominem attacks", and "irrelevant history". You should also "look for fallacies based on questionable assumptions", like "sweeping generalizations, straw-man attacks", "citing inappropriate authorities", and "jumping on a bandwagon". Finally, it's important to "locate fallacies based on careless reasoning".
The information provided will be used when I start constructing the first draft of my research paper, and sorting out which sources may or may not be trustworthy.

Chapter 11 Review

   Chapter 11 of the Bedford Researcher, one of the briefest, discusses in two Q-and-A's how to develop your Thesis Statement. For the first question, "How can I use my sources and position statement?" it recommends doing simple review, such as reviewing "your position statement", "your notes", considering "your purpose and role," and to "reflect on your readers". This question utilizes all of the past work put into the research paper and focuses it into forging an idea for your thesis. The next question, "How can I draft my thesis statement?" is answered through brainstorming. By identifying "important information, ideas, and arguments associated with your position", making different cuts of the draft, considering "the type of document you plan to write", and focusing "your thesis statement", you thoroughly focus your source's common factors and tune your thesis until it works in your best interest. Identifying your audience and who you're writing for also becomes an important factor.
   This information will probably be used in the upcoming weeks as the due date draws closer. There may be some connections to the information here and in other chapters, but that's just because the relevance of everything prior has lead up to creating the thesis statement.

Thursday, February 5, 2015

Chapter 16 Review

   Chapter sixteen of the Bedford Researcher, my most agreed and integrated with chapter yet, discusses Writing with Style. Having a good research paper with correct formatting and citation won’t take you further than the teacher’s desk, so it’s important to create a unique and appealing rhythm to your structure. Through nice and understandable examples, the text provides answers to the first question, “How can I begin to write with style?” The first tip, “Write concisely”, is one that I agree with and hope to follow 100%. It includes removing “unnecessary modifiers”, “introduction [and] stock phrases.” The second tip, to, “Use Active and Passive Voice Effectively”, shows how different tenses in time can clarify or fog up meanings. The third tip, to, “Adopt a Consistent Point of View”, stresses the importance of sticking with first, second, or third person. The final tip, to, “Chose Your Words Carefully”, is exactly as it sounds—paying attention to your formality, technicality, and degree of variety. The second question answered, “How can I polish my style?” The first tip is to “Vary Your Sentence Structure”, by changing the length and motivation from sentence to sentence. The second, to, “Create Effective Transitions”, demonstrates how to segway ideas. The third, “Introduce Other Authors Effectively”, tweaks the introduction of the source. The last three, to “Avoid Sexist Language”, “Consult a Good Handbook”, and to “Read Widely” go without saying.
   I’ll be able to use the lessons in chapter sixteen by refining my speech inside the research paper and creating an interesting, volatile but thematic and respectable form of writing.

Tuesday, February 3, 2015

Chapter 15 Review

   Chapter 15 of the Bedford Researcher describes the act of Using Sources Effectively. Like the last assigned chapter for our class to read, this one presents three questions to answer and multiple solutions. The first question, “How can I use sources to accomplish my purposes as a writer?” This has the greatest amount of answers than the rest, more of steps for success than ideas for integration. To utilize sources for your purposes, you must, “Introduce an idea or argument”, “Contrast ideas or arguments”, “Provide evidence for your argument,” “Align your argument with an authority”, “Define a concept, illustrate a process, or clarify a statement”, “Set a mood”, “Provide an example”, and “Amplify or qualify a point”. The second question, chronological to the first by proper procedure, “How can I integrate sources into my draft?” To do this properly, you must, “Identify your sources”, “Quote strategically”, “Paraphrase information, ideas, and arguments”, “Summarize”, “Present numerical information”, and “Use images, audio, video, and animations”. The final question, “How should I document my sources?” This can be done when you, “Choose a document system”, “Provide in-text references and publication information”, “Check for unattributed sources in your document”, and “Distinguish between your ideas and ideas in your sources”.
 
These steps will be integrated into my research paper when I begin my first draft and use the information on the sources I’ve collected, properly citing them and integrating them into my speech.

Chapter 9 Review

   Chapter nine, a relatively short chapter of the Bedford Researcher, focuses on Searching for Information with Print Resources. In this chapter three questions are asked and answered in detail. The first question, "How can I use the library stacks to locate sources?" Is answered in three ways: one, find related content to the book you're searching for by skimming the surrounding content, which is most likely applicable to your subject; two, ask for the books you're looking for at the front desk to be returned, brought up, or delivered for check out; three, using an interlibrary loan to request materials from a different library all together. The second question, "How can I use a library periodicals room to locate sources?" Is answered by using work cited sources connected to the materials available to find related works from the author, possibly chaining together newspapers or reels with articles and more discreet publications. The third question, " How can I use a library reference room to locate sources?" Is answered through the consultation, rather examination and investigation: of bibliographies, indexes, biographies, general to specialized encyclopedias, handbooks, almanacs, and atlases.
   This information can be used by coming to either Poulsbo or Bremerton campuses when I have the opportunity (and transportation) and searching the materials to find either sources or physical copies of papers inaccessible online.

Research Proposal


Christopher Bryan

01/29/2014

English Composition 2

Research Proposal

A bit of a dated argument, but it’s the hook I’m using. A movie where children and teenagers are forced to brawl to the death for entertainment, in a fantasy world, is rated PG-13; whereas a movie where children are bullied by other children, in the world we live in, is rated R. If you’re frowning at the idea or shrugging it off, you’re already taking a side on the debate of how the MPAA regulates a movie’s content—possibly if you’re like me, how it’s morphed the industry of Hollywood to a PG-13 frenzy of torture, genocide, drugs, mild language and decency in clothing. A few movies such as Bully and The Kings Speech were given the R treatment not because of an over-saturation or glorifying of these features, but because of foul language. In past cases appealing R ratings to PG-13, such as Gunner Palace, “fuck” was permitted 47 times. In the sense of violence, the highest ranking on-screen body count in cinema history just so happens to be a PG-13 movie (Lord of the Rings: Return of the King), at 836. The best grossing films in cinema history are lined up with G through PG-13, sparsely seeing R in the top 100 and rarely seeing NC-17 or its predecessor X in the top 10,000. Is this possibly the sweet spot for creative liberty and accessibility, or manipulation of the public to bring children to mature films, disguised as PG-13, for the best profit? If it’s the latter, who’s to blame; Hollywood or the MPAA?

One source that elaborates upon the restriction of content for benefiting motion pictures comes from a Film School professor, David Franklin, and his article published in the Journal of Film and Video in the spring of 2001, “The Professor As Censor: Creative Limitations and Film Production Pedagogy”. He experimented with limiting the content that could be inside a student’s films, then researched about others who have tried restrictions as a form of creative inspiration. Another, titled “Prevalence of smoking among major movie characters: 1996-2004”, was written by Keilah A Worth, Sonya Dal Cin and James D Sargent-- published in the magazine Tobacco Control in December of 2006. This article looks at the shift of smoking figures from the various ratings and their appearance as the years progress. The next source, “Sex-and-Violence Ratings: What's in Them for Libraries?” examines the treatment of films within public libraries and court cases concerning their accessibility in the 20th century. The article was published in American Libraries in April of 2000, written by C. James Schmidt. Another article, published in the Chicago Tribune and written by Michael Phillips, "There's a Word for the MPAA...." concerned the recent ratings of The Kings Speech and Saw 3D receiving the same content, despite being worlds apart in content-- published on November 04. 2010. A more factual and medical article, “The Effectiveness of the Motion Picture Association of America's Rating System in Screening Explicit Violence and Sex in Top-ranked Movies From 1950 to 2006”, written by Priya G. Nalkur, Ed.D., M.P.H., Patrick E. Jamieson, Ph.D., Daniel Romer, Ph.D, published in the Journal of Adolescent Health on November 2010, proves that PG-13 has allowed violence to seep in over the years, making adult content accessible to children. A less grounded but quotable source, “MPAA Defends Ratings System: Parents Are Happy from Huffington Post” on November 13th, 2013, written by Jake Coyle, talks about a more recent film caught in the R rating by language and looks to various positions for statements. An article that will help identify the revenue and predictability of income from R-rated films, “Managerial Objectives, the R‐Rating Puzzle, and the Production of Violent Film”, was written by S. Abraham Ravid and Suman Basuroy for the April, 2004 edition of The Journal of Buisness. An article that shows the MPAA’s jurisdiction on major motion pictures to independent films, “"The Ambitions of Most Independent Filmmakers": Indie Production, the Majors, and Friday the 13th (1980)”, from Richard Nowell’s article in Summer, 2011’s publication of Journal of Film and Video, will help identify how the MPAA can be biased in its judging and the fear of an above R-rating can drive a production to the ground. One last article chosen, strictly for the household name and quotability, comes from the late Roger Ebert in The Wall Street Journal publication of “Getting Real About Movie Ratings”, made public on December 11th, 2010. This article covers the state of media today, how the MPAA covers up some movies over others, and what should be done and known overall.

So far, I've collected half of the information on Google searches and some Olympic College Online Library articles, just to get a foundation on what my topic is and where it can go. The plan I have to collect information is to not sift through search result pages, but visit various sites and search for what they have to offer. Since opinion articles will be plenty, I'll need to be cautious about where I gather my sources from. OC's online library will be a major source for the research paper, if a few books are involved at all. Most of the great points about the MPAA are being said right now, so printed proof will probably be out of the question.

 

Works Cited

Abelman, Robert, and E. Jean Gubbins. "Preaching to the Choir: TV Advisory Usage among Parents of Gifted Children." Roeper Review 22.1 (1999): 56-64. Web. 27 Jan. 2015.

 

Bates, Roy E. "Private Censorship of Movies." Stanford Law Review. Stanford Law Review, (Feb. 1970) Web. 29 Jan. 2015.

 

Bully. Dir. Lee Hirsch. The Weinstein Company. 2011. Film.

 

Cohen, Joel, and Americus Reed II. "A Multiple Pathway Anchoring and Adjustment (MPAA) Model of Attitude Generation and Recruitment." Journal of Consumer Research. The University of Chicago Press, 1 (June 2006) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.jstor.org/stable/10.1086/504121>.

 

Coyle, Jake. "MPAA Defends Ratings System: Parents Are Happy." The Huffington Post. 13 (Nov. 2013) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/11/13/mpaa-ratings-system_n_4269665.html>.

 

Ebert, Roger. "Getting Real About Movie Ratings." WSJ. (11 Dec. 2010) Web. 28 Jan. 2015.< http://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424052748703766704576009343432436296>.

 

Nalkur, Priya, Patrick Jamieson, and Daniel Romer. “Movies From 1950 to 2006." ScienceDirect. Elsevier, (1 Nov. 2010) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1054139X10000790>.

 

Franklin, David. "The Professor As Censor: Creative Limitation and Film Production Pedagogy." Journal of Film and Video. Journal of Film and Video, 53.1: 25-39. (Spring 2001) Web. 29 Jan. 2015. 

 

Gunner Palace. Dir. Michael Tucker. Palm Pictures. 2004. Film.

 

Hebert, Thomas P., and Daniel R. Hammond. "Guided Viewing of Film with Gifted Students: Resources for Educators and Counselors." Gifted Child Today 29.3 (2006): 14-27. Web. 27 Jan. 2015.

 

Kehrberg, Amanda. "Bully Ratings Controversy Sparks Criticism of MPAA System." NewTimes Phoenix. (5 Apr. 2012) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://blogs.phoenixnewtimes.com/jackalope/2012/04/bully_phoenix_film_festival_ra.php>.

 

The Kings Speech. Dir. Tom Hooper. Perf. Colin Firth, Geoffrey Rush, and Helena Bonham Carter. The Weinstein Company. 2010. Film.

 

Krcmar, Marina, and Joanne Cantor. "The Role of Television Advisories and Ratings in Parent-Child Discussion of Television Viewing Choices." Journal of Broadcasting and Electronic Media 41.3 (1997): 393-411. Web. 27 Jan. 2015.

 

Krule, Miriam. "A.O. Scott’s Explanations of MPAA Ratings Are Even Better Than His Movie Reviews."Browbeat. (28 Mar. 2014) Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.slate.com/blogs/browbeat/2014/03/28/new_york_times_mpaa_rating_explanations_how_a_o_scott_turns_pg_13s_into.html>.

 

The Lord of the Rings: Return of the King. Dir. Peter Jackson. Perf. Elijah Wood, Ian McKellen, and Viggo Mortensen. New Line Cinema. 2003. Film

 

Moon, Sangkil, Paul K. Bergey, and Dawn Iacobucci. "Dynamic Effects among Movie Ratings, Movie Revenues, and Viewer Satisfaction." Journal of Marketing. 74.1 (Jan. 2010): 108-121. Web. 29 Jan. 2015.

 

Nalkur, Priya, Patrick Jamieson, and Daniel Romer. "The Effectiveness of the Motion Picture Association of America's Rating System in Screening Explicit Violence and Sex in Top-ranked Movies From 1950 to 2006."ScienceDirect. Elsevier, 1 Nov. 2010. Web. 21 Jan. 2015.< http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1054139X10000790>.

 

Nowell, Richard. ""The Ambitions of Most Independent Filmmakers": Indie Production, the Majors, and Friday the 13th (1980)." Journal of Film and Video. University of Illinois Press, 63.2 (Summer. 2011) Web. 29 Jan. 2015.

 

Phillips, Michael. "There's a Word for the MPAA...." Chicago Tribune. Tribune Publishing, (4 Nov. 2010) Web. 15 Jan. 2015.< http://articles.chicagotribune.com/2010-11-04/entertainment/chi-talking-pictures-1105_1_joan-graves-r-rating-mpaas>.

 

Ravid, Abraham Ravid S. "Managerial Objectives, the R-Rating Puzzle, and the Production of Violent Films." The Journal of Buisness. The University of Chicago Press, n.d. Web. 29 Jan.

 

Saw 3D. Dir. Kevin Greutert. Perf. Tobin Bell, Costas Mandylor, and Betsy Russell. Lionsgate. 2010.

 

 

Schmidt, C. James. "Sex-and-Violence Ratings: What's in Them for Libraries?" American Libraries. American Library Association, 31.4 (Apr. 2000): 44-46. Web. 20 Jan. 2015.< http://www.jstor.org/stable/25637581>.

 

Sneed, Tierney. "Don’t Expect Any Major Changes to the MPAA Ratings System in 2014." US News. U.S.News & World Report, (7 Jan. 2014) Web. 15 Jan. 2015.< http://www.usnews.com/news/articles/2014/01/07/dont-expect-a-new-movie-ratings-system-in-2014>.

 

Thompson, Kimberly, and Fumie Yokota. "Violence, Sex, and Profanity in Films: Correlation of Movie Ratings With Content." Medscape. Medscape, 6.3 (3 June 2004) Web. 15 Jan. 2015.< http://www.medscape.com/viewarticle/480900>.

 

Wilson, Barbara. "What's Wrong with the Ratings?" Center for Media Literacy. Web. 28 Jan. 2015.< http://www.medialit.org/reading-room/whats-wrong-ratings>.

 

Worth Keilah, Sonya Cin, and James Sargent. "Prevalence of Smoking among Major Movie Characters: 1996-2004." Tobacco Control. 15.6 (Dec. 2006): 442-446. Web. 20 Jan. 2015.< http://www.jstor.org/stable/20748060>.