Scribe from 10/30

Herbert
gave explicit position
gave evidence but gave it with generalizations, not good
big emphasis on authoritative tone
clear indication  of why topic matters- you can't advance in jobs without a college degree
didn't give more than one point of view
his tone was subjective to his point of view
he does appeal to readers values, but only if you value education


Evergreen
no explicit position besides you should watch the documentary and the 502 initiative is an important vote
did a good job of giving more than one point of view
a lot of manipulation in the trailer
gave no authoritative tone